hm, this wall kinda drag my interest ...
Looks kinda nifty, eventho there are still some places I'm not really fond in
it. Some too much contrasted parts. The upper right part, the ground (as you
mentioned) and some small parts around it.
To tell the truth ... I don't see any connection in the wall ... Riko looks like
floating in the air imo ... sitting in the air o_o; You could at least keep the
original traveling case o_o;
then, the clock on the right side, the one in front, stands out too much.
ok ... The BG kinda sucks ... the mountains are so bad quality and they are just
mirrored in the middle.
The char just doesn't fit in it ... the char is all clear, but the bg is all
blurred ... Also the tree style doesn't fit at all ...
Even the flowers are cut off on the left part
So, summed up ... you have 3 different styles in the wall that don't go together
... the blending sucks
Anyway, back to the wall. The wall looks too plain, every brick is the same ...
try varieing it. The same goes for the flowers.
The tree in front also looks awkward.
mhm, the bg is bothering me ... somehow the front part of the bg doesn't fit
with the military stuff ... o_O;
and wth is that thing in the bg ... comming from the left bottom part till the
cenetr top part O_o; ... looks too real, it's out of place
and also ... the font used for the text doesn't really fit with this wall style
...
mhm ... the wings (or whatever they are) are awkward .... should't they be on
her back? And as far as I see, her back is facing toward us o_O;
Also, the dots in the bg are too crisp (same with the edges of the char, too
crisp at some places), bluring would help. Also ... the "wind" effect
on the petals is strange .... I'd go wthout it.
oh, in the end ... the spiral in the bg is quite distractive o_O;
hm, th bg looks nifty ... but the char is kinda in a not right place. Too bright
respect of the bg, the lightning is kinda not right.
Also ... I see jagged lines around the char ....
hm, lets see ... the main problem would be the char fitting with the bg. Kinda
not right ... at least with the front cherry petals and that fence (which btw
could hava a texture or something over), the drawing style differes a lot.
The text is also a bit off place, maybe try a different font.
mhm ... the text is kinda out of place on it ... I'd go withouth it ...
and also with that yellow dots on the char, kinda distracting.
other than that, it looks nice.
merged: 05-02-2006 ~ 09:01pm
mhm ... the text is kinda out of place on it ... I'd go withouth it ...
and also with that yellow dots on the char, kinda distracting.
What's the point of that "thing" near the sword? And the wall needs clearing ... it is grainy
Hm, something bugs me ... the white borders on both arms and on the sword.
Except that ... BG is great *_*
Do you have any other resolutions of it?
omg ... look at the artifacts around Kooh's hair .... that totally sucks ... it looks even uglier on other colors. Same goes with Kooh's eyes.
HM, the light source is wrong .... see the sun position, and the light on the tree
... something is off, isn't it?
hmm ...
roflmao ... and you used Kooh from PangYa to do that .... lol
hm, this wall kinda drag my interest ...
Looks kinda nifty, eventho there are still some places I'm not really fond in it. Some too much contrasted parts. The upper right part, the ground (as you mentioned) and some small parts around it.
To tell the truth ... I don't see any connection in the wall ... Riko looks like floating in the air imo ... sitting in the air o_o; You could at least keep the original traveling case o_o;
then, the clock on the right side, the one in front, stands out too much.
Nice one ^^ The BG looks really nifty ^^
good job on it ^^
You should upload it as a stand alone wall
xD
ok ... The BG kinda sucks ... the mountains are so bad quality and they are just mirrored in the middle.
The char just doesn't fit in it ... the char is all clear, but the bg is all blurred ... Also the tree style doesn't fit at all ...
Even the flowers are cut off on the left part
So, summed up ... you have 3 different styles in the wall that don't go together ... the blending sucks
lol, you already got my comment on ap.net ^_^;;
*also faving here*
hm ... I say the char doesn't fit with the bg ... at least not in style
Scan is from He is my Master
Actually ... scan already exists
He is My Master by ansk21
hm ... the extraction is kinda bad ... I see jagged lines. And also some compression artefacts on her hair ...
Except that, it looks good
mhm ... isn't the char from the anime Lamune? ... I'm quite sure of this ... no, I'm certain about this
http://browse.minitokyo.net/gallery/?aid=1190
Anyway, back to the wall. The wall looks too plain, every brick is the same ... try varieing it. The same goes for the flowers.
The tree in front also looks awkward.
mhm, the bg is bothering me ... somehow the front part of the bg doesn't fit with the military stuff ... o_O;
and wth is that thing in the bg ... comming from the left bottom part till the cenetr top part O_o; ... looks too real, it's out of place
and also ... the font used for the text doesn't really fit with this wall style ...
haha, why does it look so funny to me ... Anyway, must say, I like the concept. The plaines makes it good ^_^;
nice .... looks great.
Just, the left grass is bothering me .... looks kinda grainy.
mhm ... the wings (or whatever they are) are awkward .... should't they be on her back? And as far as I see, her back is facing toward us o_O;
Also, the dots in the bg are too crisp (same with the edges of the char, too crisp at some places), bluring would help. Also ... the "wind" effect on the petals is strange .... I'd go wthout it.
oh, in the end ... the spiral in the bg is quite distractive o_O;
hm, th bg looks nifty ... but the char is kinda in a not right place. Too bright respect of the bg, the lightning is kinda not right.
Also ... I see jagged lines around the char ....
hm, lets see ... the main problem would be the char fitting with the bg. Kinda not right ... at least with the front cherry petals and that fence (which btw could hava a texture or something over), the drawing style differes a lot.
The text is also a bit off place, maybe try a different font.
other than this, it looks nice.
scan already uploaded Time for a Swim by Marissa
scan already uploaded The Koh Kawarajima Portfolio 01 by exentric
mhm ... the text is kinda out of place on it ... I'd go withouth it ...
and also with that yellow dots on the char, kinda distracting.
other than that, it looks nice.
merged: 05-02-2006 ~ 09:01pm
mhm ... the text is kinda out of place on it ... I'd go withouth it ...
and also with that yellow dots on the char, kinda distracting.
other than that, it looks nice.